【英语】大作文

时间：2024-02-20 12:22:32

图表作文
　　写法一（动态图）：The line chart presents information about A, B, C and D. To be specific, the number of A increases slowly from 1 in 2000 to 50 in 2010. Yet, the number of B decreases sharply from 50 to 1 during the same period. Meanwhile, the number of C remains steady at 30. Although the number of D varies, the whole tendency tends to be upward. Isolated as the figures seem to be, as a matter of fact, they are connected one another closely.
　　// 写法二（静态图）：The table shows different proportion of B, C, D and E. To be specific, the percentage of B, C, D and E accounts for 10%，20%，40% and 30% respectively. When taking a closer look, the biggest one is D which stands for 40% and the smallest one is B which stands for 10%. Isolated as the figures seem to be, as a matter of fact, they are connected one another closely.
　　In fact, this seemingly abstract chart has subtly revealed a not uncommon social phenomenon. what exactly contributes to this phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question. First and foremost ,… In addition , … Last but not least, … There seem to be more than one direct or indirect facts relating to this topic, which none of us can fail to notice. For example, …
　　After considering every aspect of this phenomenon, I , as most of others will do, safely draw a conclusion that … (On the macro level, the government should … . On the micro level, the public should enhance the consciousness of … . ) Only in this way can we do sth..

做题

完形

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  • 标段落
  • 看题干，画关键词和段落，分清楚主语是谁 问的是谁
  • 看文章答题
  • 找到了题干信息就直接去看题选择，往后看说不定会有干扰
  • 有争议就多对比一下原文，多看一下做对比花了时间做错要好

新题型

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翻译

  • 看完一整句话再翻译

作文

  • 写主题词
  • 模板
  • 小作文：20min
  • 大作文：30min
  • 阅读：70min
  • 新题型：15min
  • 翻译：15min
  • 完形：20min

开头段（引出主题+图表描述(图表描述=如表所示+图表公式)+图表总结）

  • 引出主题（总起句）
  • 图表描述
  • 图表总结

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然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

线形图

两个线一上升一下降（C不变）（重要）
（总起句）线形图呈现了A,B和C的数据。
The line chart presents the information about A, B and C.(11)
（A公式）具体而言，A的数据从1990年的1显著上升到2000年的100
To be specific, the number of A increases significantly from 1990 to 2000, ranging from 1 to 100. (from 1 in 1990 to 100 in 2000.)(18)
（B公式）然而，B的数据从100陡然下降到1，同一时期。
Yet, the numbers of B decrease sharply from 100 to 1 during the same period.(15)
（C公式）与此同时，C保持在50
Meanwhile, the number of C remains steady at 50.(9)
（图表总结）尽管数字孤立，但紧密联系。

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.(25)

柱状图

写法三：重要（满分作文写法）连续变化（after which 突出了转折点开始的年代或数据）

（总起句）柱状图展示了A如何变化。
The bar chart shows how A changed from 1990 to 2010.
（图表描述 连续变化）具体而言，A的数字从1990年的5缓慢上升到2000年的10，在此之后after which它it陡然上升到2010年的100.
To be specific, the number of A increased slowly from 1990 to 2000, ranging from 1 to 100, (from 5 in 1990 to 10 in 2000), after which it rose sharply to 100 in 2010.
（图表总结）尽管数字孤立，但紧密联系。

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

三个变量一上一下一持平

柱状图呈现了A,B和C的不同。
The bar chart shows the differences in A, B and C.
具体而言，A的数字从2000年的5缓慢上升到2010年的10
To be specific, the number of A increases slowly from 1990 to 2000, ranging from 1 to 100. (from 5 in 2000 to 10 in 2010.)
然而，B的数字从100陡然下降到10同一时期。
Yet, the figure of B decreases sharply from 100 to 10 during the same period.
与其同时,C保持在15不变。
Meanwhile, the number of C remains steady at 15.
尽管数字孤立但彼此之间紧密联系。
...

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

饼状图

第一种图的变形：

如饼状图所示，A的数量由BCD和E组成。
The pie chart presents information about A, which is composed of B,C,D and E.(16)
具体而言，BCD和E的百分比各自respectively占40%，20%，20%和20%
To be specific, the proportion of B,C,D and E accounts for 40%,20%,20% and 20% respectively.(19)
（突出点）更仔细地看when taking a closer look，可以发现B的数据最大we can find that ...。
When taking a closer look, we can find that the biggest one is B.(14)
尽管数字孤立但彼此之间紧密联系。
...

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

两个变量，此消彼长（或 三个变量，一上一下一不变）

饼状图呈现了A和B的份额不同。
（就...而言in terms of the impact of high-tech on our modern life/study/work/traffic）, the pie charts showcase the different proportions between/about/of A and B.
具体而言，A的百分比从1990年的20%上升到了2010年的40%
To be specific, the percentage of B increases from 1990 to 2000, ranging from 20% to 40%. (from 20% in 1990 to 40% in 2010.)
然而，B的百分比从80%下降到60%同一时期。
Yet, the number of B decreases from 80% to 60% during the same period.
尽管数字孤立但彼此之间紧密联系。
...

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

表格

四个常量在同一个图中（等于饼状图变形）

此表显示了有关A、B、C和D的信息。
The table presents information about A,B,C and D.
具体而言，B、C、D和E的数量各自为120、120、1210、120
To be specific, the number of B, C, D and E are 120, 120, 1210 and 120 respectively.
（突出点）更仔细地看when taking a closer look，可以发现D的数据最大we can find that ...。
When taking a closer look, we can find that the biggest one is D.
尽管数字孤立但彼此之间紧密联系。
...

然而这些数据只是浮现在海面上的冰山一角，真正要体现出来的远远不止这些。
However, these data are just the tip of the iceberg on the surface of the sea, and they really need to reflect more than these.

多个变量同时上（同时下/有上有下）→转化成线形图或柱状图

注意：图表总结句之前添加一句：
更仔细地看，最大的变化是...（突出点）。
When taking a closer look, one can find the biggest difference is ... .

中间段（交代现象+引出原因+具体原因+引出结果+具体结果）

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（交代现象）

事实上，这个看似简单的图表微妙地揭示了当下吸引我们注意的一个流行现象（：...主题词或主题句）
Actually, this seemingly simple chart subtly discloses a prevailing phenomenon that/: 主题词 has attracted our attention.

这个现象像海面上漂浮的冰山一样吸引我们的注意。
This phenomenon attracts our attention like an iceberg floating on the sea.(12)

这些数据所描述的现象像海面上漂浮的冰山一样吸引我们的注意。
The phenomenon described by these data (that...) attract our attention like icebergs floating on the sea.(15)

（引出原因）

到底是什么导致了这一现象？这是个发人深思的问题。
What exactly contributes to (this phenomenon 可换成主题词（图表数据上上升的the popular of 主题）)?It\'s a thought-provoking question.

那么隐藏在这冰山之下的具体原因究竟是什么呢？
So what is the specific reason behind the iceberg?(9)

（具体原因）

  • 媒体：宣传

    • 负面：媒体可能不太恰当地夸大了这件事。
      The mass media might inappropriately/improperly exaggerate the issue.(8)

      the issue可以换成主题词
      过度礼品消费：媒体可能不太恰当地夸大了礼品的作用。
      Mass media might inappropriately exaggerate the function of gifts.

    • 正面：大众媒体，如广播、电视和网络，适当地宣传并鼓励这一事情。
      The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, might appropriately advocate and encourage this issue.(17)

      鼓励在校大学生兼职
      The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, might appropriately advocate and encourage college students to take part-time jobs.
      鼓励农民工rural worker去大城市metropolis工作
      The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, might appropriately advocate and encourage rural workers to work in metropolis.

  • 社会：关注
    • 负面：

      • 社会缺少了对...的关注导致了...
        A lack of due attention (from ...(来自于。。)) on ...(在。。/对于。。) leads to ...(结果)(12)

      • 对...过多关注导致了...
        Too much attention (from ...) on ... leads to ...

        对城市建设的过多关注导致了经济的不平衡发展。
        两个变量的动态图出现了对比
        Too much attention on city construction/building leads to unbalanced development of economy.
        对包装packaging的过多关注导致了过度的excessive礼品消费。
        Too much attention on packaging leads to excessive consumption of gifts.

    • 正面：对...的关注促进(stimulate)了...的发展。
      Due attention paid to ... has stimulated the rapid development of ... .(12)

      对高科技high-tech的关注促进了手机的迅速发展。
      Due attention paid to high-tech has stimulated the rapid development of mobile-phone.

  • 个人：意识

    • 负面：个人缺乏...的意识导致了...
      A lack of the consciousness of ... results in ...(结果)(15)
      The public lacked the consciousness of ... .

      个人缺乏自我提升的意识导致了对工资和工作环境的不满意。
      A lack of the consciousness of self-promotion leads to dissatisfaction about/for salary/income and working environment.

    • 正面：个人已经提高了...的意识。
      The public has enhanced the consciousness of ... .(8)

      大学生已经提高了提升竞争力的意识。
      College students have enhanced the consciousness of competitiveness.

  • *：执行

    • 负面：因为缺少管制...的法律（政策policy）才导致了...趋势的扩大。
      A lack of laws and regulations to control ... leads to the expanding trend of ... .

      缺少管理外国汽车质量的法律才导致了交通事故car accident的趋势扩大。
      A lack of laws and regulations to control car\'s quality leads to the expanding trend of car accidents.

    • 正面：正是相关法律法规的执行促使这一个令人惊喜的趋势（可换成上升的趋势）出现。
      It is the enforcement of relevant law and regulation that makes this surprising trend come into being(出现).

      城市化进程urbanization
      It is the enforcement of relevant law and regulation that makes the urbanization come into being.

（引出结果）

所以
So
As a result,

正是这些不同的因素，相辅相成，造就了如今的现象。
It is these different factors that complement each other and create today\'s phenomenon.

正是这些不同因素，相辅相成，托起了如今我们能看到的这座冰山.
It is these different factors that complement each other and support the iceberg we can see today.(17)

（具体结果）

导致了上表这一现象。

结尾段（预测局势(预测局势=引言+结论)+建议措施+憧憬未来）

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（预测局势=引言+结论）

引言：

考虑到上述问题的方方面面，我像大多数人一样，可以得出结论：...
Considering every aspect of this issue, I, as most of others will do, safely draw a conclusion that ...

在考虑到了包含海面之上和海面之下的整座冰山后，我像大多数人一样，可以得出结论...
After considering the whole iceberg above and below the sea, like most people, I can come to the conclusion that...(20)

结论：

现在，人们...的趋势正在增加/减少，而且我认为短时间内这种趋势不会改变。
Nowadays, there is a growing/decreasing tendency for sb. to do sth. , which I believe will not change in a short time.(21)

二合一

在考虑到了包含海面之上和海面之下的整座冰山后，可以预见的是这种现象仍会持续。
After considering the whole iceberg above and below the sea, it can be predicted that this phenomenon will continue.(19)

（建议措施）

  • （通用）因此，正如常言道，我们应该吸取精华，忽略缺点。
    We should ,therefore, as the common saying goes,"absorb the essence and neglect the drawback".

  • 不同主体不同做法：固定主体+to do something（适用正面话题、中立话题、负面话题）

媒体宣传：
The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, should make every effort to propagate/report/publicize and advocate it.

换单词：
advocate 宣传（正面）
负面：遏制 end, prevent, put an end to

*立法：
制定法律：It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do sth.
教育公民：The goverment has the responsibility to educate/encourage every citizen to do sth.

公民意识：
社会公众提高...的意识。
The public should enhance the consciousness of ... .
我们应该采取实际行动做某事。
We ourselves ought to take practial actions to do sth.

因此，在AA不断发生变化的同时，相关机构也要不断地进行动态改变，以至于达到动态平衡，才能使社会更加和谐的发展。
Therefore, with the continuous change of AA, the relevant institutions should constantly make dynamic changes to achieve dynamic balance, so as to make the society more harmonious development.(28)

（憧憬未来）

如果所有措施付诸现实，前途一片光明。
If all the solutions are turned into reality, the prospect will become more desirable.
通过等待和希望，我们一定可以实现最终目标。
Through/By waiting and hoping, we will be able to achieve our ultimate goal.

对于未来的真正慷慨在于向现在献出一切。
The true generosity for the future lies in giving everything to the present. Just do it.(16)

总结

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　　线形图呈现了A,B和C的数据。具体而言，A的数据从1990年的1显著上升到2000年的100。然而，B的数据从100陡然下降到1，同一时期。与此同时，C保持在50。
　　这些数据所描述的现象像海面上漂浮的冰山一样吸引我们的注意。那么隐藏在这冰山之下的具体原因究竟是什么呢？首先，大众媒体，如广播、电视和网络，适当地宣传并鼓励这一事情。另外，个人已经提高了...的意识。正是这些不同因素，相辅相成，托起了如今我们能看到的这座冰山。
　　在考虑到了包含海面之上和海面之下的整座冰山后，可以预见的是这种现象仍会持续。因此，随着这种现象的出现，相关机构也要不断地进行动态改变，以至于达到动态平衡，才能使社会更加和谐的发展。对于未来的真正慷慨在于向现在献出一切。

　　如饼状图所示，A的数量由BCD和E组成。具体而言，BCD和E的百分比各自respectively占40%，20%，20%和20%。（突出点）更仔细地看when taking a closer look，可以发现B的数据最大we can find that ...。

　　①The line chart presents the information about A, B and C.(11)②To be specific, the number(rate) of A grew(increased) significantly from 1990 to 2000, ranging from 1 to 100. (from 1 in 1990 to 100 in 2000.)(18)③Yet, the amount(percentage) of B slipped(decreased) sharply from 100 to 1 during the same period.(15)④Meanwhile, the figure(proportion) of C remained basically steady at 50.(9)
(When taking a closer look, we can find that the maximum/minimum one is B.)
　　①The phenomenon described by these data (that...) attracts our attention like iceberg floating on the sea.(15)②So what are the specific reasons hiding under the iceberg?(9)③To begin with, the mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, might appropriately advocate and encourage this issue.(17)④In addition, the public has enhanced the consciousness of ... .(8)⑥It is these different factors that complement each other and support the iceberg we can see today.(17)
　　①After considering the whole iceberg above and below the sea, it can be predicted that this phenomenon will continue.(19)②Therefore, with the continuous change of the phenomenon, the relevant institutions should constantly make dynamic changes to achieve dynamic balance, so as to make the society more harmonious development.(28)
（The true generosity for the future lies in giving everything to the present. Just do it.(16)）

　　①The pie chart presents information about A, which is composed of B,C,D and E.(16) ②To be specific, the proportion of B,C,D and E accounts for 40%,20%,20% and 20% respectively.(19) ③When taking a closer look, we can find that the maximum/minimum one is B.(14)

  • 爱国意识
    Patriotic consciousness = consciousness of loving China
  • 达到饱和
    reach saturation
  • 员工、雇员
    employees
    employees above 50 years old
    below 40 years old
    between 40 and 50 years old

  • 满足
    satisfied
    satisfaction

  • 大学
    The first year of university 大学的一年级
    The second year of university 大学的二年级
    The third year of university 大学的三年级
    The fourth year of university 大学的四年级

  • 大学生
    college students

  • 本科毕业生
    college graduate

  • 花销（名词）
    spending cost consumption

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