写作满分范文
第一步：读懂原文原句；
第二步：划出原文好句；
第三步：学会造句语法亮点；
第四步：背诵好词好句配合造句练习；
On Excessive Packaging
1、目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象；
2、出现这一现象的原因；
3、我对这一现象的看法和建议；
I assume that you are familiar with the phenomenon of "Excessive Packaging". Talking a look around, we can find examples with ease: a small computeris packed in a thick and heavy carton, clothes are put in a well-designed plastic bags and moon-cakesare usually placed in delicate boxes.
1、I asuume that you are familiar with the phenomenon of...
我认为你对...现象非常熟悉（描述现象|问题功能句）
2、Talking a look around, we can find examples with ease:...
在我们的身边很容易找到这样的例子（举例子功能句）
语法亮点：主语 + be done (by...)，写作时要多用被动，非常符合英文的表达；
句子中三个并列，一般现在时的被动；
What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, to earn more economic gains, a considerable number of manufactures usually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealingmaterials aiming atattracting customer's attention,arousingtheir curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire. On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the moredelicate the package seems, the superiorthe quality will be, the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging.
3、What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand,... On the other hand,...
导致这个问题的原因是什么呢？首先...，其次...（分析原因功能句）
4、On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more... the superior... the notion has also encouraged the trend of...
其次，一些消费者认为越...越...，这个观念导致...的趋势
语法亮点：非谓语动词、宾语从句的使用、比较结构的使用
To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction on excessive packaging.Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse customers' consciousness that packaging doesn't equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend.
To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to... Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse... consciousness that... Only this way can we put an end to this trend.
5、为了改变这个形势，我认为，我们一定要采取下面的措施。首先，应该执行法律来...，其次，大家应该提高...的意识。只有这样，我们才可以结束这个趋势。（解决问题功能句）
语法亮点：非谓语动词、被动句、倒装句
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
1、坚强的意志是成功的重要保证；
2、意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命；
3、学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才；
"Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will" is accumulated experience we inherited from our forefathers. It stands to reason that persistence is vital to success; nevertheless, one's end can never be accomplished with the lacking firmness of will.
1、".." is accumulated experience we inherited from our forefathers. It stands to reason that...
“...”是我们祖先留下来的经验，我们有理由相信...（引语解释功能句）
A case in point is the quitting of smoking.On the eve ofthe World No-Tobacco Day this year, the Ministry of Education and Ministry of Public Healthadvocated thatcampus smoking-control intervention should be the forerunner of the nationwidesmoking-control efforts, which, undoubtedly, has motivated the campaign of "Smoking-free Scholl" that has been sweeping the whole of China.
2、A case in point is... On the eve of..., ... advocated that ... intervention should be the forerunner of the nationwide ... efforts, which, undoubtedly, has motivated the campaign of ... that has been sweeping the whole of China.
比如...，在...来临之际，...倡导...干预应该成为全国的先驱，毫无疑问，应该激励开展...活动，它将席卷全国。（解决问题功能句）
语法亮点：宾语从句、定语从句的使用
In the advance of the movement, the humorous saying has acquired a proverbial currency,"Quitting smoking is the easiest thing world. I've done it hundreds of time."Obviously, wanting in perseverance, these smokers will never fulfill their pruposes.
3、In the advance of the movement, the humorous saying has acquired a proverbial currency, "...". Obviously, wanting in..., ... never fulfill their purposes.
随着运动的开展，有这样的一个滑稽的说法：“...”，很明显，没有（毅力），（戒烟者）永远不会实现自己的目标。（观点结论功能句）
语法亮点：现在完成时态的使用
From what have been discussed above, we can reasonably come to the conclusionthat only those tough-minded people can reach the summit. Otherwise, even if you have triedhundreds of times, you are still at the foot of the mountain, admiringthose successful climbers.
4、From what have been discussed above, we can discussed above, we can reasonably come to the conclusion that...
综上所述，我们有理由得出结论...（观点结论功能句）
语法亮点：同位语从句；现在完成时；非谓语动词；
Online Shopping
现在网上购物已成为一种时尚；
网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题；
我的建议；
The newly coined term"shopping on live"may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age. Rightly so, a majority of people consider"shopping on the internet"asa fashionable life style and a novel way of consumption.
by no means = not
a majority of
consider... as
treat as
"..."这个新词汇在我们的生活中大家并不陌生，理应如此，一些人把...当作...
语法亮点：否定结构by no means；词语的精准表达；
There is no denying thatshopping online has exerted a profound influence on our daily life. To begin with,shopping online enablesconsumersto save a great deal of time for the reason thatwe can buy anything (that) we like anytime and anywhere.
there is no denying that...毫无疑问
sth enable sb to do...同can，什么东西能使人...
for the reason that = because
不可否认, ...已经对我们的日常生活有很大的影响，首先，它能帮助人们...因为...
语法亮点：功能句的合理套用；从句的精准使用；
What's more, there are such a huge number of discount goods on the internetthat customers whohave a poor financial situation may save a great deal of money.
such...that
其次，有大量的...以至于人们（who定语从句）可以做...
语法亮点：顺序类词汇出现what's more；there be句型；such...that或so...that句型；定语从句who；
As the common saying goes, however, "Every sword has two blades."Shopping online has also imposed a negative impact on our life. Firstly,people may get a heavy losson the condition that they purchase counterfeit goods. Moreover,good after-sale services are not usually guaranteed.
impose强制推行|dispose处置放置安排|propose提议建议提出|expose暴露显露
on the condition that = if
常言说，“任何事物都有两方面”，...给我们的生活带来了一些负面影响，首先...其次...
语法亮点：写作功能句的套用 ；条件状语从句；顺序词汇的使用；被动句are not usually guaranteed；
Due attention has to be paid to this phenomenon, from my perspective, firstly, as the coexistence of metrits and demetrits ofonline shopping, we shoud, therefore, make the best use of its fruits and avoid the opposite facets.
个人观点功能句：我们应该关注这个现象，在我看来，首先，因为...既存在优点，也存在缺点，所以我们应该努力发扬其优势避免其劣势
语法亮点：被动语态has to be paid to；动词短语代替动词make the best use of；
Then, laws and regulation should be worked out and enforced to strengthen the supervision of online shopping. Only in this way can we benefit fromonline shopping without its undesirable effects.
解决问题功能句：我们应该实施法律手段来加强...的监督，只有这样，我们才会没有任何负面影响的受益于...
语法亮点：被动语态should be worked out；倒装句only in this way can we；功能句的套用；